Tutorial With Fred

This is my updated proposal form that I took with me, along with my briefs
to my one on one tutorial with Fred.
The tutorial was so helpful and helped clear up what I wanted to do during 
my FMP and made me see the potential in all my briefs and which briefs
I should get rid of.

What was highlighted in my tutorial was that I needed to look 
at what the main focus of each brief is. All my briefs link and agree
with what I am wantint to achieve as stated in my rationale. 
I am not going to do the Over the Hills brief anymore as it seemed
to just be in there as an extra brief which had less focus than the
others.
From this I am now going to go through each of my briefs and discuss
what the main focus is and all the possible outcomes that I can achieve
from each of them and how the outcomes with vary from brief to brief.